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SDL :: Yan Qian VS Hanabi 9 by Iris-Zeible SDL :: Yan Qian VS Hanabi 9 by Iris-Zeible

Redball tournament :

Dueling with :iconshikakusuika:

The last page <3

Comment and Critiques are welcomed!
Except the toning is unclean, weak backgrounds, too much close ups and crappy grammar... I understand those weaknesses of mine. ;;

I might proofread it later. xD Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha... it hurts my head to compose all the dialogs. @_@;; I hope my english sounds better compare to the last comic I did. .__.;;

Last panel is one of my favourite. >DDDDDD MWA-HAHAHAHA-- The twisted side of Dembe.

Yes, he hate it when he "sense" that some guys are trying to get close to Qian.

Thanks to all who allowed me to use your precious characters in the story, I hope you... enjoy seeing them in my stlyle. xDDD

For those who i can't manage to ask before I draw... (Rex, Ree, Pinoko, Kurori..) I apologoze... x__x
Karasu was different though, I have ~dymaraway's full permission to draw him anytime.

Please ask--if you have any question about the comic.
(like you dont understand any part of the story)

And again, feel free to include Yan Qian or Dembe in your story/entries!

Its fun to have more friends in their little journey of SDL.

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BellaEddieworld Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009
LOVE IT!! kawaii! this is funny...: smile:
aineyakuzaboss Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Mehp Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was great. I always wondered how it would be to fight Hanabi cuz she's so cute and little ^_^
You did it well.
Koutos Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2008
I was looking for a comic to read here on diviantart and this was what I was looking for
great work!
I loved reading it!
banjim Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love your art.
Poringmaster Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
UWAH!! SO CUTE!!! >w<

That was a great Deal!!! xD The expressions are so Kawaii!!! OwO
vree Featured By Owner May 26, 2008
Possibly my favourite battle in all SDL so far. :3 You are right, the character interaction soo sells it...Two thumbs up! Not many other people can handle drawing others' characters well apparently...
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XCrissa-ChanX Featured By Owner May 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is really good!!!~~~

the lines,,, the lay out....EVERYTHING!!!~~
it's like a real manga!!~~ are you planning on publishing it??~~
it's really good!!!~~~~

awesome!!!~~~i wish i could draw like you~
animelovingfool Featured By Owner May 7, 2008
@-@ Win-win situation for Vuuk? xO
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