Redball tournament :
The last page <3Comment and Critiques are welcomed!
Except the toning is unclean, weak backgrounds, too much close ups and crappy grammar... I understand those weaknesses of mine. ;;
I might proofread it later. xD Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha... it hurts my head to compose all the dialogs. @_@;; I hope my english sounds better compare to the last comic I did. .__.;;
Last panel is one of my favourite. >DDDDDD MWA-HAHAHAHA-- The twisted side of Dembe.
Yes, he hate it when he "sense" that some guys are trying to get close to Qian.
Thanks to all who allowed me to use your precious characters in the story, I hope you... enjoy seeing them in my stlyle. xDDD
For those who i can't manage to ask before I draw... (Rex, Ree, Pinoko, Kurori..) I apologoze... x__x
Karasu was different though, I have ~dymaraway
's full permission to draw him anytime.
Please ask--if you have any question about the comic.
(like you dont understand any part of the story)
And again, feel free to include Yan Qian or Dembe in your story/entries!
Its fun to have more friends in their little journey of SDL.