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SDL duel with Kinjoh pg1 by Iris-Zeible SDL duel with Kinjoh pg1 by Iris-Zeible
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Dueling with :iconfreaky-tah:'s OC, Kanemoto Kinjoh.

PLEASE READ FROM LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT!!!

Dembe is a cuka-tong. :lmao: LOL. (means= easy jealous;; ) Like how we say in chinese, he's those type who "hide knife under smiles." LOL. :XD:

Duing to last duel comic lameness, I worked harder on this one! TTxTT;; The story is nothing interesting either, but i hope it looks nicer with more patterns.


Comic pages
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5



P/S: Special thanks to ~J-Cleo, ~Drakhael who critiqued me on the last comic.
And to those who read + faved + commented them:heart:
Also thanks to Dark and Dax for checking the grammar for me.



Kanemoto Kinjoh © ~Freaky-Tah
Yan Qian, Dembe © =Iris-Zeible
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:iconepicmyst:
EpicMyst Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I aB-SO-Lute-LY love this comic of yours! XD the expression... and--and the panelling.. the comic flow... perspective!!! Need I go ON?!?

I really think you've done a great job. ^^ So all of this done on the computer - final lineart and toning? Very nice. You look like you've had fun with this one. ^^
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:iconnakiry:
nakiry Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
OMG I loved it :giggle:
This is wonderful, so cute. the expressions made me laugh a lot, Dembe's expressions are awesome!

This page's amazing, I loved the way you distribute everything! Wonderful! Amazing work with the shadows, expressions and characters! Congratulations my dear friend! X3

Oooh, I wish I could speak english better, then I could say precisely what I want XD *don't know the right words to comment properly*
Anyway, I hope that "congratulations" will make you happy, this first page is beautiful!
:clap:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha! I use my english very poorly... That's why the words i say never seems to be interesting. TTwTT I just try my best to not make too much mistakes while writing it.

Thanks for the comment! i try to do better for the next one~
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:iconnakiry:
nakiry Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
I always do it too. My english is very poorly too. But I'm trying to get better reading a lot of books in english, and visiting many galleries here on DA, of course :giggle:

But your English is very good! I haven't see anything wrong or poorly! X3
You're welcome! It's a pleasure to see your art! *w*
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:iconrikyo:
Rikyo Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
this was great! nice job!^^
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:blushes: Th-thanks, Rikyo.
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:iconkenken2002:
kenken2002 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aiks XD~~ this is cute beyond all reason Xd~~ Great punch by the way =v=b
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Kyahahaha!! Thank you!! >w<
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:icondeeage:
deeage Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I believe that your work will be pretty much great if you do the inks (i forgot the word).
Cuz i think that the storytelling is good, and the "feeling" of you work is awesome ^^
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Inks...? you mean the inking could be improve? :D

And thank you~~
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:icondeeage:
deeage Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Line-art! i found the word! hahahahaha

i like your draws, but i think that a fine line-art will make it amazing!

like this on: [link]
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:iconink-imp:
ink-imp Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008  Professional General Artist
hahahahaha im anxious to c how this ends. And to challenge u myself.
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for dropping by. :blushes: It's an honour for me to get challenged by you. :love:

I can't wait~ o(>///< )
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:icondymaraway:
DyMaraway Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*3* nice page!
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much!! :love: :hug:
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:iconasuka2:
Asuka2 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2008   Photographer
you're the best sweetie !! ^^ Happy new year!! :glomp:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!! Asu-chan! :love:
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:icondlredscorpion:
dlredscorpion Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Artist
HAHAHAH you going for it then... they whole duel thingy eh. Im still waiting for Saku and ryu to get their character done T_T.
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, I wish i can go farer.... *just don't hope I died at the middle of the journey....* ;;;

Can wait to see you guys on action. I'm SERIOUSLY waiting hohohoho.
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:icondlredscorpion:
dlredscorpion Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Artist
LOL trying too.. .but some of our team member busy XD XD XD

Saku and ryu are struggling with kamcao work so we have to wait up for em.

LoL keep the story good and i think you character will do find. Cause she needs lots of tactic to win due to her lack of offensive and defensive strength. So you need to come out with lots of interesting ideas to win you match. ;)
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I think I need to build some special ability for my characters soon... >3
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:icondlredscorpion:
dlredscorpion Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008  Professional Artist
:D yeah. Probably she can hide small amounts of bombs and use them during battle. Concussion bombs thats it, now we don't want to end killing ppl in the duel don't we. HAHAHAHAHA
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha.. I thought of that bomby guy in KHReborn now.... XD;;
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:icondlredscorpion:
dlredscorpion Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008  Professional Artist
LMFAO well just an idea. Cause i was playing Mosou Orochi and i notice 'No' (Nobunaga's wife) keeps bombs and use them for range combat... well sort of range. :D
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:iconfalya-kun:
Falya-kun Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
HAHA DEMBEEE~ :heart:

Sorry, I think I fangirl over your characters a lot ^^;


Well the lines of the panels are a bit messy but I like the flow of the story and positioning of the panels :D
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Awwww, I hope i could get a better pen for the inking next time, I'm just... not meant for long-suffering inking... ;;;;

And thank you for the fangirl spirit! :heart: :love: Thanks!!
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:iconfalya-kun:
Falya-kun Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008
Haha I understand xD
You're welcome! Your characters are so fangirlable. Lol. xD
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:iconn0isehazard:
N0ISEhazard Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
XD Aaahhh~! Iris-chan!! I love your expressions and your presentation is just too cute! *___* :heart: I still entirely adore your style! :floating: Even your manga-type drawings look so soft! :glomp:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:wow: OMG isn't this you, Tiffany? :omg: its been a whileeee~ TTwTT

Thank you so much for dropping by! :hug: :heart:
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:iconserenityangel7:
SerenityAngel7 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
wow thats so kewl!!~ >< wish my character dueled with yours ^^
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Why not? :love: Once I had finished with Kinjoh, I wish to have more chances to meet with other duelers!
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:iconserenityangel7:
SerenityAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008
yay~~ that would be awesome!! ^^ -:glomp:- if you want to know more about my character tell me :P
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Sure! Now i need to rush my SDL entries! TT///TT
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:iconserenityangel7:
SerenityAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008
^^ no its ok :D just take it easy ^^ i can wait :3 I'm just really happy your gonna do mine~~ ^.^ I'll send a note to you or something :P
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:iconiluvvincentvalentine:
Aww how cute xDD Super special awesome :3
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:iconmangakaluna:
mangakaluna Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDDDD "egg tart" XDDD lol, that's awesome!
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Egg tart is very tasty! :heart:

Thank you! :hug:
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:iconrenka002:
renKa002 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional General Artist
You're right about Dembe being easily jealous... but its sooooo cute! (not for the dude he punched though >.>;)

Anyway anyone can see you are trying harder with this one! Better panels and you even took time with the background XD lol
can't wait for the next page! :heart:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha! You don't like Kinjoh? :XD: *pats kinjoh*

:love: And thank you so much!!
If I have to CG the whoke thing... haha! It will take my life for sure~ ^^;
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:iconrenka002:
renKa002 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional General Artist
that wink thing wasn't suppose ta happen ^^;
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:iconneoloverwu:
neoloverwu Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
:XD: Hahaha!! Egg tart! Your drawings are soooo good! Love it! Wish it was coloured, probably even better! Anyways, great job and a Happy New Year to you and everyone!! :hug:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah haha! Egg tart is so tasty. :love:

If i were to CG the whole thing... haha, might die soon! ;; ^^;

And thank you, Happy New Year to you too! :hug:
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:iconneoloverwu:
neoloverwu Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
Egg Custard Tart? I love that!

:XD: I wish I knew how to screentone stuff...

Your Welcome, countdown!! :XD: :hug:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:

Oh! you changed your icon to Sasuke eating~ *lol*
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:iconneoloverwu:
neoloverwu Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
:XD:
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:iconforbiddenimmortality:
awww~~~~~
jeealousy!!!~~
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Lol yeah!! ^^; Drama waves~
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:iconlilblkrose:
Lilblkrose Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Student General Artist
aww Dembe ish so cute ;D :heart:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007  Professional Digital Artist
Haha, he'll be happy to hear that! :love: Thanks black rose! :heart:
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:iconj-cleo:
J-Cleo Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2007
Definitely much better than the other comic. Good job on creating different styled fonts for sound effects based on each situation. Also liking the added textures/tones. And of course, always love the exaggerated faces. Too cute. XD
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