Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
December 30, 2007
Image Size
262 KB
Resolution
800×1210
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
5,149
Favourites
82 (who?)
Comments
57
Downloads
81
×
SDL duel with Kinjoh pg1 by Iris-Zeible SDL duel with Kinjoh pg1 by Iris-Zeible
:iconsdl1plz::iconsdl2plz::iconsdl3plz:

Dueling with :iconfreaky-tah:'s OC, Kanemoto Kinjoh.

PLEASE READ FROM LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT!!!

Dembe is a cuka-tong. :lmao: LOL. (means= easy jealous;; ) Like how we say in chinese, he's those type who "hide knife under smiles." LOL. :XD:

Duing to last duel comic lameness, I worked harder on this one! TTxTT;; The story is nothing interesting either, but i hope it looks nicer with more patterns.


Comic pages
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5



P/S: Special thanks to ~J-Cleo, ~Drakhael who critiqued me on the last comic.
And to those who read + faved + commented them:heart:
Also thanks to Dark and Dax for checking the grammar for me.



Kanemoto Kinjoh © ~Freaky-Tah
Yan Qian, Dembe © =Iris-Zeible
Add a Comment:
 
:iconepicmyst:
EpicMyst Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I aB-SO-Lute-LY love this comic of yours! XD the expression... and--and the panelling.. the comic flow... perspective!!! Need I go ON?!?

I really think you've done a great job. ^^ So all of this done on the computer - final lineart and toning? Very nice. You look like you've had fun with this one. ^^
Reply
:iconnakiry:
nakiry Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2008
OMG I loved it :giggle:
This is wonderful, so cute. the expressions made me laugh a lot, Dembe's expressions are awesome!

This page's amazing, I loved the way you distribute everything! Wonderful! Amazing work with the shadows, expressions and characters! Congratulations my dear friend! X3

Oooh, I wish I could speak english better, then I could say precisely what I want XD *don't know the right words to comment properly*
Anyway, I hope that "congratulations" will make you happy, this first page is beautiful!
:clap:
Reply
:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha! I use my english very poorly... That's why the words i say never seems to be interesting. TTwTT I just try my best to not make too much mistakes while writing it.

Thanks for the comment! i try to do better for the next one~
Reply
:iconnakiry:
nakiry Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
I always do it too. My english is very poorly too. But I'm trying to get better reading a lot of books in english, and visiting many galleries here on DA, of course :giggle:

But your English is very good! I haven't see anything wrong or poorly! X3
You're welcome! It's a pleasure to see your art! *w*
Reply
:iconrikyo:
Rikyo Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
this was great! nice job!^^
Reply
:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:blushes: Th-thanks, Rikyo.
Reply
:iconkenken2002:
kenken2002 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008
Aiks XD~~ this is cute beyond all reason Xd~~ Great punch by the way =v=b
Reply
:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Kyahahaha!! Thank you!! >w<
Reply
:icondeeage:
deeage Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I believe that your work will be pretty much great if you do the inks (i forgot the word).
Cuz i think that the storytelling is good, and the "feeling" of you work is awesome ^^
Reply
:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Inks...? you mean the inking could be improve? :D

And thank you~~
Reply
Add a Comment: