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SDL duel with Kinjoh pg1 by =Iris-Zeible:iconIris-Zeible:

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Dueling with :iconfreaky-tah:'s OC, Kanemoto Kinjoh.

PLEASE READ FROM LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT!!!

Dembe is a cuka-tong. :lmao: LOL. (means= easy jealous;; ) Like how we say in chinese, he's those type who "hide knife under smiles." LOL. :XD:

Duing to last duel comic lameness, I worked harder on this one! TTxTT;; The story is nothing interesting either, but i hope it looks nicer with more patterns.


Comic pages
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5



P/S: Special thanks to ~J-Cleo, ~Drakhael who critiqued me on the last comic.
And to those who read + faved + commented them:heart:
Also thanks to Dark and Dax for checking the grammar for me.


Kanemoto Kinjoh © ~Freaky-Tah
Yan Qian, Dembe © =Iris-Zeible

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~Coffee-chan Dec 31, 2007, 12:07:31 AM
No critique.. But I hope you don't mind my saying of how you're doing an awesome job so far and I can't wait to see more!
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~ili-azzurylln Dec 31, 2007, 12:35:17 AM
all the expression is dem cute i tell you!!! >XDDDD

but i hope you can put more drastic expression when Dembe punched Kinjoh like putting soem blood effect etc. ^^ that maybe can add more humour element in it. xD

but but, i just have to repeat this...


I LOVE THEIR EXPRESSION SO MUCH! >W<
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~J-Cleo Dec 31, 2007, 12:49:26 AM
Definitely much better than the other comic. Good job on creating different styled fonts for sound effects based on each situation. Also liking the added textures/tones. And of course, always love the exaggerated faces. Too cute. XD

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Kazuo: Those... those're wiretaps! Uwaah! Those perves listened to me busting a solo on my meat flute last night!
Nobuto: F***, man. In my case it was a duet.
Toki: Uh, you guys are missing the point...
- Bus Gamer, The Pilot Edition
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~Lilblkrose Dec 31, 2007, 12:53:58 AM
aww Dembe ish so cute ;D :heart:

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YOU! Join my ~poke-battle Club! D< NOW!
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*ForbiddenImmortality Dec 31, 2007, 2:50:05 AM
awww~~~~~
jeealousy!!!~~

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FI is 不值时间，最懒惰的孩子和爱抱怨。
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=Iris-Zeible Dec 31, 2007, 4:26:47 AM
Awwww thank you so much, Coffee-chan! :heart: :love: I'm so glad to hear that! :heart:

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=Iris-Zeible Dec 31, 2007, 4:27:22 AM
:D :D :D Ahahaha!! Thank you for the suggestions! And thanks for the comment~ *hugs* :hug:

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=Iris-Zeible Dec 31, 2007, 4:29:10 AM
Oh Cleo~ TTwTT All thanks to your critiques last time! >_<;; It make me realize how bad was it... :faint:

I will try to be better and better on this! Reference is so important, lol. And again, million thanks! :hug:

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=Iris-Zeible Dec 31, 2007, 4:29:35 AM
Haha, he'll be happy to hear that! :love: Thanks black rose! :heart:

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=Iris-Zeible Dec 31, 2007, 4:29:55 AM
Lol yeah!! ^^; Drama waves~

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