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SDL duel with Kinjoh pg5 by Iris-Zeible SDL duel with Kinjoh pg5 by Iris-Zeible
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Pleace check out *RoninsUltramix if you wish to know more about Samurai Dueler League.

Dueling with :iconfreaky-tah:'s OC, Kanemoto Kinjoh.

PLEASE READ THE COMIC FROM LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT! LEFT TO RIGHT!!!

*vomit bloods* I always end up rushing things...
The ending is not exciting at all. ^^; Sorry to dissapoint you.

For those who read the whole comics, thank you so much! :worship:

And to those who still don't understand what is going on in the comic:
Iris's original characters are fighting ~Freaky-Tah's character. Why are we fighting? This is a league, held by *RoninsUltramix. Same thing like ENDZONE, where you create comics or animations to determine the win and lose of a duel.

For moreeee details, click ==> :iconroninsultramix:<==
Feel free to note me if you have any question about SDL. I will try my best to guide you how to join.

And for those who is interested to challenge me, note me NOW!! I only have like...2 slots open for duel! ^^; The fastest dude will get the slot.


Comic pages
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5


P/S: Thanks to Dread knight for suggesting all the dialogues.
And also thanks to Tah-chan who challenged me. I like Kinjoh so much! :heart: He's hawt! XDDD I had so much fun~



Kanemoto Kinjoh © ~Freaky-Tah
Yan Qian, Dembe © =Iris-Zeible
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:icondreamingeri:
DreamingEri Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Student General Artist
may i ask, in the league, do you draw the whole comic??? and then submit it to the group? or you alternately complete the comic with your opponent?
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guzu Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2008  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol, how did I miss that comic! Great job on that one! :thumbsup:
I like the prayer part the most XD
"Please don't vanquish me!" :rofl:
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ayattousai Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
haha!

Yashirou: next time i'll be the one to protect yan-chan from pervs! koraa!:rage:
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renata-young Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008
After read the entire comic/round, here are my critcs:

....

Yep, there's nothing to critique about!
It's funny, very well done and... PERFECT! XD
Great work, Iris!
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sapphireyuriko Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2008
COOL MANGA!!!! :omg: :clap: Looks like a pro works!!! You realy improve a lot!!! :thumbsup: I faves all the comic!!! >w< Do you mind if I post up your manga at :iconmanga-lovers-club:? It's a way of promotion ^^
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you then! XDDDDDDDDD
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AKATSUKIninja Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2008
LMAO i love kinjoh here~! acting all tough n stuff xDD :heart:
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sugardropped Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008
This may seem really random, but what font did you use? :3
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
It's call "Anime Ace", a very comman font used for manga. Try to google it and downoad for free.
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sugardropped Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2008
I have no idea what to do with it once it's downloaded. First time doing this~ '''> 3<
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
If you are using PC = go to control panel, find "font", then put the typeface file in the "font". It wil install the font for you, and it will be usable in almost everywhere of your computer. (include MSN, microsoft word, Adobe Photoshop etc etc.) Which means it will become one of the font which is available in your computer.

If you are using MAC, just double click the file. I think the font manager will let you choose to install it.
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BehemothLeviathan Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008   Traditional Artist
Woo! Funny comic. That last lina was Über.
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nakiry Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008
"So she cry out a name for it ha ha ha" omg LOL! ~ This page is *can't stop laughing* AWESOME! XD I LOVED IT !

Everything, all the pages are amazing, congratulations! The characters are soo lovely, I loved them too. Kinjoh expression there was just like : OMG lol lol lol *dies* And Yan Qian is so strong and at the same time so cute ! X3 What about Dembe? He's the best >XD hohoh!

Really, congratulations Iris, this was really an awesome job! And sorry about mu comments, I'm not really good with english. >__<
:clap:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
:D :D :D Hahaha!! Thank you so much for the comments, Nakiry!!

There you go again lol... ^^; Your english is pretty fine to understand nee? My english is no good as well. :XD:
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nakiry Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2008
You're welcome ! I always say, and I'll say it again: it's a pleasure to see your art, because it's really a wonderful art, and makes me feel very happy! *__*

Well, I don't think my english is very good, but if you understand it than it's fine! X3 Someday I will be really amazing in english, and I will say everything that I want to say and I can't because I don't know the proper words in english. >____<

And your english is amazing!
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Joichiroll Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
hahaha this is so cute, and i love your version of Kinjoh haha! He's so sexy and hot in your version <3 haha, i thought Dembe was a girl at first, sorry! but its such a cute story, though i was alittle confuse of where the story was going but the expressions were to die for <3 Love it!
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Awww, I seee I see! Thanks for pointing out the good + bad points nee! ^w^

The story is just about dueling Kinjoh... I didn't plot it properly at first, I just draw the panel randomly... ^^; After that, I was given more time, so i shaded the comic properly, so it doesn't look too bad...
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Drakhael Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
heh... I lol'd

And don't put yourself down on it, spinning fan of doom is one best attack titles ever to yell out... Not to mention is actually accurate...

Like J-Cleo said, backgrounds would be a good thing to work on, though you are very good at making sure we don't pay attention to that lack.

Also the scripting might still need some work - Little bits of text that could have been there to make everything fall into place instantly, but weren't, like Qian's vanquishing speech, which seemed to come out of nowhere, when a simple declaration of how this is all Dembe's fault would have explained it, or on page 3, Qian cry of 'No!! Dembe!!', which I for one assumed with her meant something happened to him, where something like 'What have you done?!' would have made everything really obvious.


And Kinjoh's final words were excellent...
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Hahaha!! Am I? Thank you so much for the comments, Drakhael. :D I will try my best to improve better!

And you are so true about the scripting... I tried my best to make sure the grammar is perfect, but I forgot to make sure all of the dialogues make perfect sense... ^^; Thanks for pointing that out.

Oh yeah, I was thinking can Qian and Dembe be friend with Grace? I might want to draw her again in the future.
Grace's kind personality kinda attract me! :love: But I guess she's kinda retarded inside...^^; Am I right? haha!!
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:icondrakhael:
Drakhael Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2008
Heh, sure they can be her friends. Feel free to add her in whenever you want.

But I wouldn't say shes retarded, more incomprehending and out of her league, as she didn't want to join the SDL herself, and doesn't understand what anyone is saying, as she doesn't know any language besides her native english (at least not yet, though shes trying to learn off Yakki, which is probably the hardest quest there is :D) , so the only way she can understand what everyone else is saying is though Yakki's translations.
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SerenityAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
lol~~!! that was awesome!! ^^ so... will you do mine next -sparkles- wait what do i do for the dueling part?
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Haha! We have to discuss it over first. But I think before that... Redball come first! Do you plan to join that tournament?
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SerenityAngel7 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2008
wait ? what redball tournament? D:
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knaji Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
Just read through this duel and i really enjoyed it. It's so funny :D *:hug:dembe*. Your art skills are amazing :gasp:! So gonna :+watch: you now to see some more stuff(and dig through your gallery when I'm not so tired^^)
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Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Heehee, I'm glad you like them, Knaji-san. :love:
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cacingkk Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
i wana challenge u!! hehe :D
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
COME FORTH! >D HAHAHAHA!!!

Serious ah? You guys all macam joke joke saje. >_>;;
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cacingkk Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008
wahaha! i half serious...
coz after i buy my tablet then i will challenge u lol :XD:
(now is wait some1 confirmation~)
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Lol, ok ok ok then. XDDDD
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neoloverwu Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
:XD: Haha, faggot.
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Freaky-Tah Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
Ahahahah, owned by the spinning fan of doom XD poor Kinjoh =D
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Lol!! Finally it ends nya? :faint:
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JinZhan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
I like page 3.. >8D LOL~! yes vanquish him~! >D he ruin the whole fun >3
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Same here, hahaha!! :XD: I like page 3 lol.

If Dembe didn't smash Kinjoh then this comic will end up like a hent** comic lol.
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renKa002 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional General Artist
Do not underestimate a girl's accessory....

the last panel was pretty funny :D
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Heehee, thanks for reading! :love:
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kenken2002 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol ~~ it took you only 2 hours to draw the last page ??!! ZOMG !! you are so win ... i just don't get why qian wanted to vanquish dembe though =v=~ ......................... who cares ~ as long as i had good comics to read XD !!??
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Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
I tried as fast as I could... Actually the baselines is already done, so all i do everytime is shade and shade and adding some lines effect. :D

heehee, Qian wanna "vanquish" Dembe because he created all those fuss, and she was forced to duel Kinjoh randomly... ^^;
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kenken2002 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am so jealous that you got invited by endling to join his gokiburi-club .... XD JOO LUCKY GAL ~~~
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Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
omg, >___<;; I was sooo panic when he asked so!! And very very excited too~ x__x;;
Probably he's my top idol in dA. ./////.
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kenken2002 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
icic ~~ so the next art you'll be drawing is for the redball 2008 ??
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah! I'm still thinking what to draw... Might get some inspiration first. :love:
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gunblade7777777 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008
AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA AHAHHAHAHAHA

as i went through it it got more interesting I LOVE IT! XD ahahahahahahahhaah

" Hear the Prayers of ure humble servant, please vanquish this unworthy servant of mine from my sight! " AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH

thats in my quotes AHAHAHHAHAHA
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Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
OMG! Thanks for all the laughes! :love: It makes me reeeeeally happy nee, John-san! >w< :heart:
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gunblade7777777 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008
ahahahahahahah thats ok yo xD it really is awesome~ XD
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sootydustbunny Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008   Traditional Artist
i read this through plus the other one that you had done of other duels and they are funny and i enjoy reading them! :D but i don't understand the SDL part of it, because if you have to comic/animate the outcome of the battle, can't you just always make yourself win??
but anyway, coolio comic! :love:
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Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for reading them!

So you are interested with what SDL really are?

"Where you and your opponent create comics or animations to determine the win and lose of a duel."
Which mean you and your opponent both create a comic (and of course, you must draw yourself win, and your opponent will draw himself win.) , and you are fighting with your skill in drawing comics and creating stories. So do you get it now? This OC duler league thingy is purposed to test your skill on comic/animation/storyline! ^w^
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sootydustbunny Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008   Traditional Artist
ah, thank you! so who really wins the duel, is the artist who has a better comic? and there is no real winner/loser, you both go onto round two? sounds cool :D ... except i cant draw comics ... ^^; but your comics are very good, i love them! :love:
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:iconiris-zeible:
Iris-Zeible Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah! The artist who have the better comic will win the duel. It is all depending on how the SDL headmaster decide it.

And thank you again! ^^ Try to train a little, comic isn't that hard, just...take a lot of time. ^^;
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lires Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
qian is so kawaii.. :3
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